tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post6431208885007493675..comments2023-06-14T21:12:22.878+10:00Comments on Meaninless Meandering from a Madmother: The Romance Series - Write On Wednesday (Day 1)Madmotherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/18189416781378632230noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-54611596770657018682011-07-07T20:10:12.310+10:002011-07-07T20:10:12.310+10:00The second one was particularly clever. Very topic...The second one was particularly clever. Very topical language and references. Nice one, MM. This genre suits you. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-82637067711455113392011-07-07T13:38:13.620+10:002011-07-07T13:38:13.620+10:00Brilliant! I loved the romantic language of the fi...Brilliant! I loved the romantic language of the first and found the second one very funny!Lenehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01967670281829933493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-80088260190687525982011-07-07T01:21:54.406+10:002011-07-07T01:21:54.406+10:00The second is my favourite. Love 'defriend thi...The second is my favourite. Love 'defriend this bed' and I think it flowed better and certainly has more potential to develop into a readable story.<br /><br />I have to say, I did like the excesses of the first as well.Susan Whelanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18253437044745874795noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-86621236551779710392011-07-06T16:20:21.663+10:002011-07-06T16:20:21.663+10:00Really enjoyed the second one. Very funny, good fl...Really enjoyed the second one. Very funny, good flow.Jennifer Smarthttp://asampler.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-87403727397449986492011-07-06T13:51:17.517+10:002011-07-06T13:51:17.517+10:00Ha, ha....loved it! I'm with Al...loved the se...Ha, ha....loved it! I'm with Al...loved the second one. Very natural. :)Jodie Anstedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12300961546795965857noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-91256014517151725012011-07-06T11:04:09.993+10:002011-07-06T11:04:09.993+10:00Funny funny funny! Version One is hilariously Twil...Funny funny funny! Version One is hilariously Twilight, while Version Two seems to me to have the flow of something that could go further. I loved the sentence, "everyone knew Jay Ramsay was on the way down the ladder whilst her star looked to be ascending quicker than a new moon." Yay for you!life without mathematicshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04115727837229182798noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-69144008555826232272011-07-06T10:27:04.620+10:002011-07-06T10:27:04.620+10:00PMSL. That second one is a definite winner. Much m...PMSL. That second one is a definite winner. Much more natural. I'm thinking that it is much more your style than the first!allison taithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00762529258195877400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-62776466385515960162011-07-06T09:38:34.870+10:002011-07-06T09:38:34.870+10:00I can't decide which one I like better either!...I can't decide which one I like better either! I love the language in the first one, but I love the idea behind the second one. Well done!Janellehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06459852025135239788noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-14496709441087016122011-07-05T23:30:25.362+10:002011-07-05T23:30:25.362+10:00Ha ha, loved this. Defriending the bed might be th...Ha ha, loved this. Defriending the bed might be the sensible option but how much more satisfying to behead the fiend!Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04402703967636964187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-37040483199172148232011-07-05T22:18:37.367+10:002011-07-05T22:18:37.367+10:00Oh, they're both fantastic. I'm not sure w...Oh, they're both fantastic. I'm not sure which one I like better. "Defriend this bed." Love it!<br /><br />Anne @ DomesblissityDomesblissityhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07270409725826410919noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-68040679654130581372011-07-05T15:38:18.583+10:002011-07-05T15:38:18.583+10:00I write like I talk. Fast.
It was two seperate 5 ...I write like I talk. Fast.<br /><br />It was two seperate 5 minute blurbs though, not in one.<br /><br />My kids are getting a hoot out of being the timekeepers, lol.Madmotherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18189416781378632230noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-64630165032773007382011-07-05T15:27:14.440+10:002011-07-05T15:27:14.440+10:00Awesome. You got all this in 5 minute stints?? Wha...Awesome. You got all this in 5 minute stints?? What an imagination?! Very impressed that you have already cranked out TWO pieces with this prompt. xoInkPaperPenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14595595934607152505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4361480824395722677.post-26070668701115398262011-07-05T09:40:56.047+10:002011-07-05T09:40:56.047+10:00Love it! Hilarious!Love it! Hilarious!Megan Blandfordhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12932508388869573748noreply@blogger.com